Some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion
people differ from each other in their choices of climate. While some like tropical climate, others have a preference for chilly conditions. This essay will discuss both types of weather preferences and present a personal opinion.
On the one hand, in many tropical regions people like their weather because they depend on it for their subsistence. Firstly, the unfailing event everyday of the Sun rising at the horizon, draws them out of their homes for agricultural activities. Men and women in these places, who have grown seeing their parents work in the fields on sunny days, have developed an appreciation for these outings as the harvest brings happiness to their faces. moreover, there is very little to manage in summer for them which gives them freedom to lead an easy life. For example, nationals of the south-asian countries can cope with the even extreme hot conditions by just managing an electric fan for their bedroom and a fridge for the kitchen. For these people, life in cold conditions would be unimaginable as arrangements for heating their home environments and warming water for domestic use would mean a heavy financial burden.
On the other hand, people living in the Northern Hemisphere enjoy their lives because there are more options of winter sports. it is sports what many Europeans like as their hobbies and although getting outdoors can be extremely challenging under the freezing conditions, sports like sking, ice skating and ice hockey make them forget the weather and enjoy the thrill of the sporting activity. moreover, these physical activities are not a mere source of fun but they also help them build strength and stamina and most importantly, to keep away cold.
In conclusion, people who are content to be outdoors and intend to care only about having to manage bare minimum necessities in life take a liking for hot climates. Whereas, individual obsessed about challenge and keeping fit, prefer cold and polar climate. personally speaking, mild climate is more preferable as we have little to worry about our basic necessities and also because it keeps us calm and equanimous invariably every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11079545455 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58982327477 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0116968225 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.933333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159828697583 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649184687213 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579721633591 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120557160203 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861280830078 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.