Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Brazil is a country mixed by different cultures, even physically is difficult to imagine how a brazilian native looks like. A common characteristics that almost every brazilian have is affection. Usually, we are warm people, happy, we love to stay together, everything is a reason to give a party and we are so kind with foreigners. But, being warm people would be a custom that everybody in a world could added in their cultures.
This affection and trend to be a warm people reflect in our general behavior. For instance, a simple fact like meeting new people could be different for us. Usually, we give a hug and a kiss in this situations, we are worried about the wellness of the other, like: if everything is fine, if there are something that we could do for help etc. Indeed, we are nice with everyone.
Currently, I am learning english and definitely learning a new language is learning a new culture. So, I was watching a YouTube video made by an american girl and she was learning portuguese. In this video she was talking about how different brazilian is talking on cell phone. For instance, I am talking with my best friend on cell phone and I ask about her mother. She talk like: - Oh, my mom is fine. And like a brazilian girl I would say: - Nice, tell her that a send a kiss. So, back to the video. The american girl was saying that in The US, she would say: Tell her that I say hi! It is really a different culture If here in Brazil we just say Hi! Definitely, it is because we do not care about the people.
At the same time we are kind with visitors, we treat with patience and we can help them. Even if brazilian do not know the native language from the foreigner but we endeavor to help. Of course, everybody loves this attention. Especially if a person being from another country. For example, when we travel to another country, everything is new and pretty different from our native country. Sometimes we need help because simple activities like to go to a supermarket could be a nightmare depending of the country.
For those reason, being warm with everyone regardless the nationality or another difference, is a brazilian custom that all countries could include in their culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'look'?
Suggestion: look
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'characteristic'?
Suggestion: characteristic
...a brazilian native looks like. A common characteristics that almost every brazilian have is aff...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etc. Indeed, we are nice with everyone. Currently, I am learning english and def...
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Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'talks'.
Suggestion: talks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, well, for example, for instance, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61518987342 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66073427477 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9192189523 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2608695652 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1739130435 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102675083042 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333947735965 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338408055217 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699591350051 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266474159651 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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