Write a letter to an employment agency. In tour letter :
Introduce yourself.
Explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir \ Madam,
I am writing to you looking for a part- time job opportunity in the beginning let me introduce myself , I am a twenty-one years old student at faculty of business administration at Cairo university .My term finishes on 15th July and I will be free until 15th September , I am looking for a job in this period .Last summer I was worked in a large restaurant as a waiter , I met tourists from all over the world and this let me gain my English practice and I have more knowledge about different cultures. I am able to standing for a long time . I am also working two years later in a reputable hotel as a room serves , I can cleaning room and changes blanket and beds covers.
Thank you in advance and I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Ahmed shawky
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...in the beginning let me introduce myself , I am a twenty-one years old student at ...
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...iness administration at Cairo university .My term finishes on 15th July and I will...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...ess administration at Cairo university .My term finishes on 15th July and I will ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...My term finishes on 15th July and I will be free until 15th September , I am look...
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...and I will be free until 15th September , I am looking for a job in this period ....
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... , I am looking for a job in this period .Last summer I was worked in a large rest...
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Suggestion: ,
...worked in a large restaurant as a waiter , I met tourists from all over the world ...
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...s. I am able to standing for a long time . I am also working two years later in a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time . I am also working two years later in a reputable hotel as a room serves , ...
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Line 2, column 617, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...r in a reputable hotel as a room serves , I can cleaning room and changes blanket...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'clean'
Suggestion: clean
...eputable hotel as a room serves , I can cleaning room and changes blanket and beds cover...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om you in the near future. Ahmed shawky
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 644.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32214765101 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61305455555 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664429530201 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.564090864 44.8134815571 416% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.0 76.5299724578 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.25 16.8248392259 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946998498997 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399658086639 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493211551599 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914255717752 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018064642166 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 8.37731958763 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.37 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.