The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
us" style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Cambria",serif; mso-ansi-language:EN-us">The graph illustrated the comparison of amount of money for spent on books between germany, france, and austria from 1995 to 2005. Overall, throughout 1995 to 2005 germany is the most country which it spent its money more than 80 million us dollars per year for purchasing books. On the other hand, during 1995 to 2001 austria was the lowest as caused it just purchased books between 30 to 40 million us dollars per year.
us" style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Cambria",serif; mso-ansi-language:EN-us">Furthermore, france was positioned as the second rank that since 1995 to 2005 it purchased books more than 50 million us dollars per year. On the other hand, over 1995 to 2003 italy was the third rank that it spent 50 million us dollars per year minimally. However, during 2003 to 2005 italy was positioned as the fourth rank as caused of since 2001 to 2005 austria uplifted its amount of money for purchasing books significantly, attained up to 60 million us dollars in 2005.
us" style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Cambria",serif; mso-ansi-language:EN-us">On the other hand, during 1995 to 2005 while the number of purchasing books of germany tend to fluctuate unexpectedly, france lean to increased slightly, italy tend to decreased from 1997 to 1999 and increased again slightly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44334975369 4.92477711251 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.6022761863 2.65546596893 399% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7940766855 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.857142857 112.824112599 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165644553709 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110772698122 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574843201937 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134914928438 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719928574658 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.2329268293 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.66 11.4140731707 181% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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