The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?
Technology is usually evolving according to different people' demands. Some individuals believe that younger generations have a conspicuous impact on such enhancements. In my point of view, I wholeheartedly disagree with that and this essay will explore the reasons of my opinion in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
First of all, there is no doubt that most of the young adults or even children are living in an innovative era as well as they are the main users of it. Using these latest technical tools such as PCs, smartphone and others might help them to participate in enhancing the current technology. Moreoevr, there are a plenty of channels such as different social media platforms where creators can demonstrate their notions to the public. These channels might attract many companies to sponsor them. In contrast, there is an extremely tough competition among applicants, and at the same time, most of the sponsors are merely looking for the quality of products regardless of the applicants ages.
Second of all, it’s irrefutable that there are a plethora of successful old innovators who were working very hard in extremely poor resources to establishing a new trend or enhancing the current facilities. Those people might spend their lifespan in terms of proving their idea to the public. For instance, the founder of Apple company, Stive Jobs. He was working at his own garage and he had a strong belief on his skills. As a result of impressive works, he eventually established a great company which's now become the number one worldwide in the electrical field and contribute in developing the technology.
To sum up, although younger people might be the most technology users, but that not means they are the merely creators or developers of these technical enhancements. In my opinion the resilience and passion are the key of any success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and passion are the key of any success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, well, for instance, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11326860841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87598679573 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0677336638 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814696912374 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255571163626 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311230916839 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492390945161 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219164275541 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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