Relationship needs to be nourished by demonstrating care and love towards people. Different methods can be used to express importance to any relations, some people opine that gifting is a established and best form for demonstrating care whereas others argue for much effective ways. This essay will discuss both views and conlude that other ways such as communication and sharing are more effective tool for developing a caring bond.
Gifting is undoubtedly a very popular, well established and effective method to showcase care. People feel happier upon receiving new things and it goes a long way to represent love & care. This way gift culture is developed which is continued in form of return gifts and thus relationship evolves. Efforts behind gift are the true reason people feel cared as they know someone out their wants to make them happy.
Sharing and regular communications are the best ways to show that we care about friends and families. Sharing things of utmost importance implies that we value them and appreciate their feedback. Sharing stories works both ways and when we know more about someone's lives and vice versa, relationship flourishes. In form of sharing, we open doors to our heart and thus it is a good way to show that we value the relationship and we care a lot to make sure that person is part of our life. In addition, regular communication is the key because a person feels attached only through emotions that we create using communications.
To conclude, love and care are the pillars of any relationship and there are many ways to express these emotions to friends and families such as gifts, sharing crucial aspect of life. In my opinion, although gift culture is used commonly to represent our care towards other, sharing and connecting are more effective as it creates a long terms bond in terms of stories of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94888178914 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73543150169 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514376996805 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8984041418 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274998314328 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971910979507 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493377928094 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157695907856 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372174831658 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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