Environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays. The governments have taken some measures at a global level. But they get only a few solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?
The industrial revolution has dramatically affected our environment at an alarming rate. The pollution levels have continually increased, and we are actually at the brink of climatic disaster. Although the authorities had been taken serious former steps to bring about plausible solutions at an international level, it seems that these measures are not compatible with the world's demands for heavy progress. In this essay, the reasons for this issue will be discussed, and solutions will be suggested.
Generally speaking, there are several reasons why the government's actions towards saving the environment are not put into practice. Perhaps the most serious one is that promoting greener and cleaner energies will cause a big loss to giant firms. For example, fossil fuel industries make a trillion dollars of business profit for these companies. If the local people are directed to renewable energy, these huge corporations will eventually witness a great age of recession. Hence our governments are always acting in favor of powerful lobbies and companies, which in turn contradict the government's aims to protect the planet against contamination.
However, many solutions can be addressed to tackle this issue. Firstly, political leaders of the world should fund their people more to develop convenient technology that qualifies them to use renewable source of energy such as solar power and biodiesel. Secondly, the incorporations of awareness programs to the local citizen in order to show them the drawbacks of consuming fossil fuel for energy production. As a result, they may be motivated to exploit cleaner and safer energies at the end. Hence, tacking this problem needs that everyone performs his/her duty to the place where he/she happily live.
To sum up, the government should work harder to provide more easily reaching solutions as these mention in this essay. Moreover, individuals should not just sit back and say this government's role. Rather, they should take a serious challenging step. It is hoped that these practices put into action in the foreseeable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4128440367 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8166316338 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639143730887 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1142610533 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176384528258 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049610946589 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437582390575 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968978612466 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479910866318 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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