The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by vivukhue on Mon, 08/26/2019 - 06:37

The bar charts illustrate 4 destinations of graduates and postgraduates in UK who did not work full-time job in 2008.

Overall, the number of students pursuing further study was highest, while the figure for voluntary work was smallest. In addition, the number of graduates opted for each destination was much higher than postgraduates did.

In terms of UK graduates, higher diploma was the most common destination with about 30 thousand of students chose to pursuit. The number of graduates did part-time work was approximately 18,000 while the figure for unemployment was slightly lower, at over 16,000. The destination with least graduates following was unpaid job, with only 3,500 students.

The number of postgraduates following further study in 2008 was above 2.700, which was equivalent to under one tenth of the figure for graduates. It was followed by part-time work, with over 2.500 people opted for while the number of jobless people was above half of that number, at just over 1,600. Only a minority of postgraduates did voluntary job, with nearly 350 students.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...npaid job, with only 3,500 students. The number of postgraduates following furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26011560694 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86770456866 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0066863114 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160014579363 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955637974753 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999751939589 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157596711365 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120436855363 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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