In many part of the world today there is a profitable is a market for the products which lighten or white people skin outline the reasons for using products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health society.
The important of in many Part of the world today there is a profitable market for the product which lighten or white people skin outline the reasons for using product and discuss what effects they have in terms of health society which was always has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that now day many market products is increasing day by day. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that market products such as makeup. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that all these 60% women use to market product. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that many women use to makeup with this put bad effects on skin. Besides, 90% moving skin problems such as cancer. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the not beneficial market products in human life are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
The important of in many Part of the world today there is a profitabl...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...is argument is that all these 60% women use to market product. Needless to say, all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04744525547 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55801927759 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.8625570212 50.4703680194 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34976220453 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991956846457 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176012883943 0.071462118173 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186233128434 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151122222455 0.0609392437508 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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