Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.
Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
learning can be done in many ways. we can learn from experience as well as from people surronding us. people around us can be categorize in to two groups as people who have same views as us and people who have views condradicts to our own. In this argument author claims that we can learn more from people whose views we share. however, In my point of view I am not agree with the statement and i think that we can learn more from people with different opinions. To bolster my claim three factors can be explained as below.
First of all, many people think that people who have same opinions with us are the best people and all of us like to spend time with them. we like that because it is easy to handle with those peoples and by being with them we can reduce the stress. however negative side causes from this is if we have bad opinion or incorrect opnion these type of people not going to point it out. In this case many of the time we think that we are correct and we do wrong things. if people views are contradict with us we automatically going to analyse our views. Otherthan this people with contradictory opinions may see negative sides of our ideas that we cannot recognize. Since they are third party and they are not directly involve in our opinions they may see the negatives and wrong doings very clearly. therefore, they are lot to learn from these contradictory ideas.
Secondly, to find more inovative things people should consider contradictory views other than same views. As a example at first the world beleive that the earth is flat. if all people willing to accept that because agreement is better than disagreement until now we may in wrong opinion. if people aberate from the convention and think differently that may cause in lot of inventions.
Although, many may argue that the claim given by the author is valid because of the reason explained by the author. Yes, it is true that disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. however, if we not consider condractory ideas because of stress that may be result in more danger. if we think a situation like changing the business ideas for the future, if we consider only the positive opinions we may not see the bad sides which are going to happen beacause of our idea. therefore, it is more important to consider about negative opinions about over idea and consider those to correct our false.
All and all, from the above facts it is clear that there is more to learn from contradictory ideas than same views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, as for, i think, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6280623608 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39488155478 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416481069042 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6327954615 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5833333333 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7083333333 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461709521733 0.243740707755 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148845097413 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113661216281 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254204763402 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115304400573 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.