Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from
their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is a view that a person’s culture and personality can be established simply by recognising
the clothes they choose to wear. In my opinion, although one’s choice of clothing can tell us a little
about these traits, we cannot learn a lot as appearances are only informative up to a point.
To begin with, it is important to acknowledge that the dress sense of many people is reflective of
their culture and interests. This is because in many cultures there is a particular code for how to
dress appropriately. For instance, a man wearing an expensive suit and holding a briefcase is
understood to be steeped in business culture. Because of these social symbols, including suits,
sunglasses and religious garments, it is possible to quickly ascertain that people live in one culture
instead of another.
That said, there are limits to how much we can discover just by looking at someone’s clothes,
especially when it comes to their character. After all, it is said that you should never judge a book
by its cover. To illustrate, a woman dressed all in black may be judged to have a depressed,
morose personality as we associate such feelings with this colour. However, it is more than
possible that such a woman is returning from a funeral or simply thinks she looks good in black,
and, more importantly, that she has a happy, cheerful nature.
In conclusion, while it is not impossible to gather accurate information about a person’s
background and character via their dress sense, there is a real danger of being misled if we rely on
this method of assessment at all times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03296703297 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96471215705 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8038452593 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203086413938 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669862271374 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446307855037 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544280374532 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506280368878 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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