In a moderen age businesses have become a trends , everyone want to be a business man by opening some starter company. I do agree that making money is not wrong I too want to earn some but I dont agree to this statement "to make profit they should do anything."
I a few reasons for it and I will explain.
first of all, I think this it's very important that one should have some work ethics and show some care and respect to mankind. One example came into my mind though its not pleasent but anyhow it is best one to take learning. Bhopal witnessed a worst industrial disater in the history of man kind.UCIL a chemical company used to store methyl isocyanide gas( toxic gas) in the ground floor, the storage had needed some repairment but they didn't do any investment to make it safe for it. they didnt show any care for the employee.Due to leak of the toxic gas, more than 5000 died. I think every whenever the responsible person will think about their mind will say this was wrong. So here I want to say this any businesses must show respect to humankind because their life is more than the earning money. They should h
have kindness in the heart.
My second reason is health and environment, these days many company uses plastic because it's very cheap but they forgt it nonbiodegradable, in other words, it can be degraded therefore will cause
soil pollution. many business person dont care about plant they just cut tree to build the shopping mall and other building. I would they can construct malls stuff but they should dom plantation
then they have right to cut the palnt. Everyone knows the plans play an important role to make our environment clean and so the businessman.
Furthermore, a businessman should make money bu using other strategies but not compromising the health and environment because we all are responsible for to save our world equally. They also should respect
the humankind by putting a lot of safety device and maintenance in the industry.
In conclusion I will strogly say that a business should make a profit but puting smile on person's face on sucking the blood. Last but not the least we all are human being before then a businessman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a trend' or simply 'trends'?
Suggestion: a trend; trends
...In a moderen age businesses have become a trends , everyone want to be a business man by...
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...ow some care and respect to mankind. One example came into my mind though its not...
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...t they should dom plantation then they have right to cut the palnt. Everyone kn...
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... world equally. They also should respect the humankind by putting a lot of safety...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, therefore, as to, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67700258398 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58927125764 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532299741602 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.500832707 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156410123146 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496093418881 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653200635756 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608796501408 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068522431391 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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