Dear George,
I hope that you had an amazing weekend and thanks a lot for throwing us an excellent birthday treat. I know that you have planned for the movie Avenger endgame, but I'm sorry that I will be unable to join a movie with you tomorrow night and how about if my office colleague Shyam joins with you in the cinemas?
I am assigned on an office tour to Mumbai, where I along with my manager have a client meeting. As all these arrangements were made in such short notice, I could not able to inform you earlier. Moreover, this a crucial gathering, hence at any cost I have to be present there.
Today, I asked Shyam if he could make to the movie and he is very much excited about it. He is my fellow colleague and you both have met once in Hotel Taj where I throw a party for my kid's first birthday.
I'm damn sure he will be the best movie partner, as he himself a great fan marvels series like you. In addition to that, he is also a fan of KFC, so you both can have your dinner together post watching the movie. I will text you his number through whats app and share him yours too.
With love,
Akil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nned for the movie Avenger endgame, but Im sorry that I will be unable to join a m...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Shyam joins with you in the cinemas? I am assigned on an office tour to Mumbai...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'colleague'.
Suggestion: colleague
...is very much excited about it. He is my fellow colleague and you both have met once in Hotel Taj...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... a party for my kids first birthday. Im damn sure he will be the best movie par...
^^
Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...vie. I will text you his number through whats app and share him yours too. With lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1797235023 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12692656258 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5334012546 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23306979521 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838321996376 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728336275463 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139925800659 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803043387921 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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