Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People learn things better from those at their own level, such as fellow students or co-workers, than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.
With the rapid development of learning environment, there are many different kinds of learning methods and people learn knowledge and new things from various aspects, from technology to people around us. Except for the books and other online learning materials, people have developed other ways of learning, some are used to learn from their classmates or co-workers, others are used to learn from their teachers or supervisors . In my opinion, I think it is better to learn from people who are older than me. Below I will list some reasons in detail.
Firstly, I think the advantages of learning from those who are at a higher level of ourself, is because those elderly have more social experience and the older they grow, the more knowledge and experience they acquired, likely the more we can get and learn from them. Secondly, compared to learning from our own level, it is more beneficial that we can learn different things from those who older than us , the knowledge we can learn from them do not come in bondage to the books we have in the schools or the things we know from the jobs , we can learn the way of dealing with others and the fickleness of life, to me those things are more valuable than learning from those who are at the same level of me.
In short, I would say that people have their habitual way of learning, no matter it is from the people at their own level or at a higher level, it all depends on what people want to learn, and who they may encounter in their life.
- TPO 41 Integrated essay 85
- TPO 37 Integrated essay 3
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- TPO-40 - Integrated Writing Task 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ment of learning environment, there are many different kinds of learning methods and people le...
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Line 1, column 428, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...learn from their teachers or supervisors . In my opinion, I think it is better to ...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rent things from those who older than us , the knowledge we can learn from them do...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ools or the things we know from the jobs , we can learn the way of dealing with ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, except for, i think, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54444444444 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35327388959 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455555555556 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.746487674 48.9658058833 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.285714286 100.406767564 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5714285714 20.6045352989 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.45110844103 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405479628893 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192693780991 0.076458572812 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935097406452 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285769623783 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024901884659 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 11.7677419355 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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