A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
Give information about the flat
Provide any important instructions
Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear John,
I hope you are doing great. I am writing to thank you for looking after my apartment while I am gone for the holidays this coming week; I knew I could count on you for important matters.
There are some important matters I want you to know before you move here temporarily. For instance, the flat is on the 1st floor so you will not have any problems going up and down every day. Also, the apartment complex has ample parking space and you would not have to worry about parking your truck.
I have already notified the apartment union and close neighbors about your temporary stay. There have been a number of burglaries in the past month so you have to be vigilant of trespassers. Do not forget to secure all door locking mechanisms which I installed last month.
There is a first-aid box in case of minor medical emergencies in my room. if there is a fire incident, please find two fire extinguishers in the storage room but only use them if you really believe the fire could be controlled, otherwise, save yourself first.
I hope you will enjoy your stay. Should there be an accident or emergency, notify me on my mobile number.
Regards,<br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Line 25, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ify me on my mobile number. Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52283361581 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.213536072 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253334437578 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902401881128 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752329569679 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130063969328 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706580695205 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.