Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss advantage and disadvantage of having vegetarian diet and give your own opinion.
There are some people opine that becoming vegetarian has many perks to the world and individuals. However, from my perspective, i think the disadvantages of this trend outweights the advantages
On the one hand, it is is " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">undeniedable that a veget diet brings difinitely benefits for people's health. Nowadays, the proportion of meat and fish which which " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">are treated by synthetic fertilizers or chemical pesticide is is " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">significantly growing. The less products made from meat and fish fish " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">are consumed, the fewer risk of illnesses human have to cope with. Additionally, vegetables which have high value of fibre have many advantages for human's digestive system and help people people " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">assimulate easier.
On the other hand, not eating meat or fish has detrimental impact on human body. Peple need a huge amount of calories to do leisure activities that vegetables cannot provide. If the body has a lack of calories in a long term, people would not have enough energy to work or do anything else. As a result, people will always feel exhausted and lack of motivation.
In conclusion, i believe that not eating meat or fish has its own pros and cons, but i argue that human body should have have " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">adequated vitamin and energy so that people always in the best mood
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13286713287 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.36436474107 2.80592935109 156% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493006993007 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.919294435 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.4 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110691948361 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694180951485 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443406639355 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10597473061 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426902197157 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.87 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.