Many people believe that family has greater impact on children life? do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Many people believe that family has greater impact on children life? do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Family play significant role among Julienne life. It is suggested by follows that family indoctrinate enormous thing to blooming buds than the other factors such as kith and kin, TV, music. But I partially agree with this statement.

To begin with, family teach many things to their offspring. brood communication skills and good manner can be gained by kids while spending time with their Parents will reads to become vigilant. Parents have lot of experience Because they have keen through many up and down in life. Parents Prefer to share with their children it makes them brave to encounter any kind of menace in their life. Because offspring imitate to their parents. Moreover parents always Provide better nourishment to offspring it help them to stay healthy in life. However Parents always encourage them to involve in physical activities It makes them extrovert and escape them many types of ailments.

On the other hand, it is certain that TV and kith and kin also have great impact on children. Team work is learnt by kids while sped time plunge discrimination among them. It makes them sociable. Moreover huge knowledge is gained by TV. Because it broadcasting many types of Daily soup which provide knowledge to denizens it is very fruitful for them. To exemplify, one is discovery channel give knowledge about wild life and science. It may very Profitable for kids in their education.

In this final analysis, I would concede that. Other factors also plays indispensable role among kids. It teach them lot of things.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Family play significant role among Julienne life. I...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Brood
...y teach many things to their offspring. brood communication skills and good manner ca...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'read'
Suggestion: read
...e spending time with their Parents will reads to become vigilant. Parents have lot of...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have lot of experience Because they have keen through many up and down in life. P...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...unter any kind of menace in their life. Because offspring imitate to their parents. Mor...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...use offspring imitate to their parents. Moreover parents always Provide better nourishme...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...vide better nourishment to offspring it help them to stay healthy in life. However P...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...g it help them to stay healthy in life. However Parents always encourage them to involv...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ion among them. It makes them sociable. Moreover huge knowledge is gained by TV. Because...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'teaches'?
Suggestion: teaches
...plays indispensable role among kids. It teach them lot of things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03529411765 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53366719102 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1944747165 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175080157575 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562851649558 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753002830234 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105160884957 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649702179411 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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