SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE A HIGH MORE SOCIAL/OTHER BELIEVE
IT IS OPPOSITE.DISCUSS BOTH VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Nowadays, technology is playing a prominent role in folks life. Some folks think
that
technological innovations made folks more sociable, while others disagree with it.
In this essay, I will discuss both the views and give my opinion in
further part.
On the positive side, it is a fact that modern technology is part of human life.
Furthermore,
it is now possible that folks can easily contact each other who are living in
other countries, states or cities with the use of the internet, mobile phones or laptops
on
a regular basis. Besides, frequently contact among relatives, family members,
friends make their
bond strengthens. It also plays a strong role in transportation facilities
like metro trains,
flights through that travel time has minimized and folks can visit their relatives, clients,
friends wherever they want. There are huge benefits to the industries, stock markets, digital
currency markets and so on. Through, technology employer, clients, and employees interact with
each other easily. Furthermore, folks get live updates regarding market situations. Technology
has increased the interections among folks.
On the negative side, sometimes, children and adults become more obsessed with technology that
may avoid interaction with their relatives and friends. Moreover, children become
more attract
towards new gadgets that may avoid spending time with their parents.
It will not only affect their
present life but also affect their future. Through,
using more technology it affects their health
like eyes and other parts of the body.
For instance, children who are at a very small age get to wear
lances or become
irritate easily.
Ergo, I agree that modern technology has given folks a platform to stay in touch
with their loved ones but at the same time it has taken out face to face interactions
with each other.
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| 2019-08-31 | punam joshi | 67 | view |
| 2019-08-31 | punam joshi | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59322033898 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6181344466 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2339388861 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0588235294 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148392422852 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052959560991 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598518534892 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429627137661 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598398679512 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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