Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to illustrate it.
Choosing career is one of the most vital decisions that any young person has to face it sooner or later. It considered so important since it can change our fate in life completely. Generally, most people think that children should follow their parents and choose their occupation field for their future. However, some other people indicate that a different choice would be far much better for them. In my view, I believe that children must have the freedom to pick their future career themselves due to two reasons which I am going to discuss about.
First, children should discover their own path in life and they cannot just imitate everything from their parents, as it may lead to some serious issues in the long term which cannot be compensated anymore. We have to respect the fact that may be our children have other talents and potentials that can help them in future. For example, my friend Jim raised in a family where everyone around him were doctors and his parents forced him to become a surgical doctor too. In contrast, he never wanted to study medicine or any related subjects in this especilty. He had a keen interest in art especialy painting. His parents banned him from going to art school and send him to medical school anyway. Surprisingly, in the first day of his class, he just fainted when he saw blood in the operation table. Eventually, he went to art school and he succeeded in that major. He sold so many painting that made him greatly famous and rich. So, following parents’ footsteps is not always right.
Second, finding a job means entering a competetion where you should qualify and be the most sutiable candidate for the job to be recruited. So, it would be so hard, if you limited your options to just your parents occupation specifically. Children should have a variety of chocies to choose between them that are rationally better in any case. The availablity of the jobs is a crucial factor that ought to be considered since young adults have a short period of time to decide about their future career and if they delay this by trying their parents job and fail to find it good for themselves they lost their time too.
In conclusion, finding your future career can be so much difficult and stressful. Some people like to continue their parents’ pathway. Some other youngsters decide to build their own route where they have talent on. So, it may be logical for the parents to let them decide by themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...lents and potentials that can help them in future. For example, my friend Jim raised in a...
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Line 3, column 989, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts' footsteps is not always right. Second, finding a job means entering a c...
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Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...sidered since young adults have a short period of time to decide about their future career and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, however, if, may, second, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in any case, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73426573427 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48994915074 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522144522145 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7652963343 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3043478261 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.652173913 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263277650551 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069364763236 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737576329459 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167614791427 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07064526035 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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