Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about wrong information which was published in your monthly magazine last month.
First of all, there was a section related with Abraham Brown who is world renowed writer. His childhood, novels and family life were deeply detailed in that article.
Secondly, I realised that there were any information and anecdotes about his experiences as a soldier at Germany during World War II. He was not doing research between years 1943 and 1945 as written there. I would argue that audience should know this fact given the fact that war had altered the way he lives and his writing styles. I had worked with him at Newsline Magazine for then years and I know that it was a turning point for him.
Finally, I would like you to publish a revision to decleare your mistake. I also would be grateful if you could write a paragraph about effect of war on his thoughts and feelings. I hope a prompt action will be taken. If I can help you in other ways, please let me know.
Thank you consideration in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64948453608 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40528963258 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664948453608 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7367104553 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3846153846 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207689660103 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666944146264 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690653972147 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124426503259 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827115166035 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.