People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Travelling to abroad is rapidly increasing.it is argued that people should follow their customs and traditions when they live in country.I artially disagree with the statement am going to explain my point of view in further paragraphs with suitable examples Firstly, i believe that when people live in another country it is not important for them to live in their customs because they do jobs there so they cannot live in tradition meet themselves acording to environmre they live such as one of my cousin is live in abroad he told me that he do the job in multinational company there so he follow the those rules which his company said. living in abroad is not too much beneficial because people start to like the environment where they live so they cannot live in their culture there because it is present in the nature of people where they live they start to copy those people where they live for example i was listening to it revealed that 67% people live in abroad do not live in their tradition To close it is clear in the above essay that people do not follow their customs when they live in abroad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55778894472 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38618872237 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467336683417 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 20.2975951904 488% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 453.5 106.682146367 425% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.5 20.7667163134 479% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346544050394 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297795397034 0.084324248473 353% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00405920270092 0.0667982634062 6% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346544050394 0.151304729494 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.8 13.0946893788 380% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.55 50.2224549098 -41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.7 11.3001002004 360% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 10.1190380762 411% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.