Some people think it is the best approach for studentsto learn if schools start the day at an early time in themorning. But some think the school should start the dayat a late time. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and detailed examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, there is no secret that education is so important in individuals' life, and due to mentioned importance of education, authorities strive to make a situation through their decisions for students to maximize the efficiency of education. I , personally, believe that it is more beneficial to start classes in early mornings.
first, due to the fact that there are two type of students in general, those who can learn better in mornings and those who are more comfortable with afternoon classes, and percentage of people who learn more effectively in morning are more that people who are more comfortable to learn in afternoons and nights, it seems completely rational to have classes in mornings. under these circumstances , not only can most of the students learn and understand lessons in a better way without any modification in their body clock, there is a good chance for the other group to get use to this schedule. And, this change in their body clock can benefit them in many ways. for example I inherently was a evening person, but I has changed my habit by means of adapting to my schedule in high school and university. Now I am so comfortable with my job, because my job start at 8 O clock each day. If I had not adopt myself to working or studying at morning, I would have so many issues in my vocation.
second, it is so helpful for students to conduct some examinations and to observe different phenomena that they have learned in their lessons theoretically. And due to the fact that these examinations sometimes require some expensive or huge facilities, and the budget of schools are limited , the authorities of school and teachers can bring these students to relevant institutes and laboratories to accomplish this mission that can maximize students' understanding about their studies. as a result of that, HOLDING classes in early morning seems essential to be compatible with these relevant institutes ,most of which are open just in mornings.
in conclusion, I am of the opinion to hold the classes in mornings. this is becuase it can benefit both type of people eith respect to their body clock ,and it make it possible to be in relation with other institutes that are relevent to schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, may, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92351274788 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83687275758 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532577903683 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.315667532 48.9658058833 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0909090909 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0242761944125 0.236089414692 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00907011762983 0.076458572812 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0107105190588 0.0737576698707 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0165459849986 0.150856017488 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00862677610726 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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