some people think that it is good to lay out for leisure time activities and other think that there is no need for any outlining
The discussion on some people think that it is good to lay out for leisure time activities and other think that there is no need for any outlining is a debatable and people around the globe are divided in their argument. The subject attracts majority of view from people and remain a hot topic among people of concern. In this essay i shall scrutinize both points of view by providing some relevant example and explantion before drawing any conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that the out for leisure time activities is more important in human life. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that 80% people to need leisure time activities because they are more need to rest. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that people do like leisure time but the not best bacause he is make in interest work. Besides, 2015 in 60% people do not like leisure time activities because they are full interest in work. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of leisure time because they are full time work so that they are need to leisure time are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88549618321 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52106098687 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522900763359 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2867307293 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438327035588 0.242375264174 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149955726998 0.0925447433944 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208114146498 0.071462118173 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254373544334 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1759347398 0.0609392437508 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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