DIFFERENT CULTURES are MIXING today and the world is becoming a GLOBAL VILLAGE. Is it a POSITIVE or a NEGATIVE development? Give your own opinion and examples.
Owing to the surge in globalisation, lifestyles and cultures of different countries have become identical. In my perspective, the integration of various cultural values is a positive trend considering the economic development and the reduction of gaps between the nations.
To embark on, the most obvious factor that makes the mixing of ethnic values an effective phenomenon is an increase in the country's economy. This is because the multinational companies invest in various countries and provide a global platform for the individuals from all over the world to work together and share traditions, which, in turn, leads to the financial progress of the host nation. Additionally, if the larger number of youths will work with these organisations then more tax will get paid and the employment index of the country will get high resulting in the increase of its economical wealth. For instance, a German-based multinational company Nagarro is the highest paying company for IT-professionals in India, and employee working in this company pays maximum development tax than any other company.
Another positive aspect of this prevailing trend is that it reduces space between the countries. The reason for this is, the world has become a global village where people are migrating from one country to another and sharing varieties of traditions and cultures which has inculcated the sense of respect among them. This further generates harmony and decreases the chance of global tensions and wars. For instance, despite many ethical differences, approximately two thousand people immigrate to the Canadian land from India. Therefore, sharing of values has made the world a happy place to live in.
In conclusion, it can be stated that the development of global markets leads to a beneficial trend of integrating the world. In my opinion, mutual interaction between people of different cultures is a positive development because it benefits the economy and minimizes communal gaps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40836012862 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99022922674 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0991575232 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.384615385 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189983767463 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693320290087 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557316226915 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137949358378 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687988879622 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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