Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today."
Firstly, new transportation vehicles will soon replace cars and change the world significantly. The new transportation vehicles, using only electricity as energy, are more environmentally friendly than the conventional fuel-powered vehicles. Now, in the suburb of my hometown Beijing, the new electric buses have been put into use. Accordingly, the gas stations will be gradually replaced by the “electricity stations” if the electric buses can win supports from public. It is foreseeable that the electric buses become more popular among families. The number of cars will reduce in the coming years.
Secondly, people in increasing numbers are aware of the urgent requirement for a cleaner environment and then, they might refuse to use cars in daily life. The automobiles business went through tremendous development over the past century, which has brought convenience to car owners but disasters to our environment. Strong evidence shows that the hole in the Ozone Layer over the Antarctic region has expanded at an alarming rate beyond prediction. Besides, polar glaciers quickly melt down by serious global warming. It is the emission of cars that has been accused of being the prime suspect for these environmental problems.
Thirdly, peoples’ traditional conceptions of cars will change in the future. In the past, an expensive car, a big house and a large number of savings in the bank used to be a symbol of a successful person. A car owner was more popular among young girls compared with a man who did not afford a car. However, in recent years, whether the man has a car is no longer a key factor when a girl considers her marriage. Girls nowadays pay close attention to a man’s educational background and virtues. so I predict that fewer cars will be bought as a necessity for family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...past, an expensive car, a big house and a large number of savings in the bank used to be a symbol...
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Line 9, column 506, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s;s educational background and virtues. so I predict that fewer cars will be bough...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18518518519 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07625466157 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3859724429 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5882352941 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164901600447 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534286202848 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419558139898 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106200952635 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371777052279 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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