Dear Aliza,
I shall be grateful if you assist me with the presentation of some new montessori material on the 30 april at Avari Towers. As far as yourself is concerned you are running your own Montessori it will be beneficial for u as well.
The material that we will lodge is to enhance the development of mathematics, sensorial, language and cultural aspects in a child. It has some new techniques of understanding and presenting in front of the child which will be not collapsing with the previous method. It is much easier in handling and cleaning. The children are definately going to love working with them. They are more game based which will develop more interest in childs mental growth. I want you to give lectures on the benefits of these materials. Moreover 70% of Montessori dierectress are invited for this presentations. I'm looking forward for a prompt response.
Lastly i believe that it is going to be a great help for the directerres if they utilze these materials which will surely help in building up the personalities of their students.
Thankingyou
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