You want to take a holiday in another country. During your holiday you would like to meet one of your friends who lives there.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• describe the types of place you would like to visit
• ask some questions about accommodation
• suggest some activities you could do together
dear Nhu,
how are you doing these days? Oh my lovely besti, the summer has come for a week. And i have planned a trip at your place. it would be a big pleasure for me if you would nod your at my offer that you would become my tour guide.
this is the first time i have been in the Europe. I would love to take germany as my start. And I have chosen Berlin. I have heard that the branden tor is one of the most deservable sightseeing to all the tourists, who come and visit this glamorous capital. you were born here. Thus you must have known it so well. it would be a big pleasure if you can come and pick me up at the station. By the way, should I book a room at Booking.com from now on? And which place will be suitable and convenient for me to have a great moment taking pictures, wandering at the branden tor?
Moreover, I would like to try some germany milk tea. do you still remember the time, which we have spent with each other in Ho Chi Minh city. we did try almost all the teashop there just to find which flavor could comfort your strict tongue. we can have a tea tour like that.
I am looking forward to your answer.
With all the love
Your dear Tuyen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.08154506438 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01591596649 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6746697014 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.0526315789 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2631578947 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251041452381 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761253331915 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548799456896 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14948205922 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487120388566 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.5 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.79 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.