TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since technology has improved significantly, diverse resources are available for acquiring information. In this regard, some people believe that for being well-informed, utilization of different resources is required. On the other hand, some people hold the opposite idea. In my view, getting information from diverse sources is more beneficial. I will illustrate my reasons in the following.
The main reason why I hold this idea is that gaining information from different resources gives us this opportunity to obtain information thoroughly and very easily. Otherwise stated, diverse sources such as tv, radio, books, and magazines are more available and accessible for people in comparison with just one resource. hence, people can gather more information to have a better understanding of events. For instance, when I was a freshman, I had a project in my biology class which was about recent advancements in technology in the field of biology. I used different resources like internet, books, and also a tv channel which informed people of the latest improvements in technology. so, I was able to acquire adequate knowledge for my project and I accomplished my project on time. If I had not had access to different resources easily, definitely I was not capable of gaining enough information and finishing the project on time.
Another paramount reason why I hold this idea is that it is more reliable to get information from different resources. Alternatively stated, all the information in the world are released by people and it is probable that these people make some mistakes. inaccurate information may mislead a lot of people. so, in order to be sure about the accuracy of our information, we can get information from diverse resources and then, compare them with each other. hence, we have this opportunity to be aware of reliable resources. For example, one of my friends is an environmentalist and she wanted to write an article about deforestation. For this purpose, she just used the internet as a reference. After a while, so many critics sent an email to her because she had written some inaccurate information on her article. Had she used diverse resources for her article, she had never been criticized.
To put it briefly, based on what is mentioned before, no one can underestimate the effect of different news resources for people who want to be well-informed. gathering information from diverse resources is a reliable way of being sure about the accuracy of our information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
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Suggestion: Inaccurate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19704433498 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13353544475 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9732442984 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7391304348 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.652173913 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166251279568 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054958436298 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460559132544 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117623295429 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260036796803 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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