Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my opposition to recent decision on local community centre. It is vitally important for country dwellers to have healthy and happy life, and thus it must continue to provide service.
First of all, many elderly people for example my mother who suffers from arthritis go swiming regularly which makes them relaxed and strong. Many childrens also join art classes such as pottery, watercolor painting or sculpture at the weekends which help them develop a strong sense of individualism, self esteem and self reflection.
Secondly, it is an essential facility for parents who want to spend time with loved ones since there are numerous sport activities available which they can attend together. Further and more importantly, 80% of people living in this town are over fifty consequently it is vital for them to release their energy and to recharge their batteries with peers.
Finally, many people will move to cities which provide a wide range of facilities and amenities unless there are enough swimming pools, care homes and art centres. Many parents want children develop many skills in early ages, and thus if there is a scarcity of such facilities, rural depopulation will be a major problem. Moreover, community service will not be provided adequately since there will not be enough workers to clean streets and drive buses. I hope these detrimental consequences will be discussed seriously.
I am looking forward to hearing cancellation of it promptly.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...promptly. Yours faithfully, Mary Brown
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23107569721 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68084567641 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677290836653 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4848461653 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 4.34317383033 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0363321680506 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0185354795785 0.0766984524023 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039134136559 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0144310984116 0.12726935374 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239830878513 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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