Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child‘s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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...of many factors. Some individuals are of the opinion that parents have the most s...
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...icant role in a child's development whereas others opine that friends and ot...
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...er environmental factors such as TV have a more important role. It is necessary t...
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...nvironmental factors such as TV have a more important role. It is necessary to...
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...look at both arguments before forming an opinion. Parents have direct interacti...
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...th the children. They provide a sense of identification to the child. These have ...
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...he children. They provide a sense of identification to the child. These have their greatest...
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...ve their greatest effect on intellectual development and character traits. They a...
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...heir greatest effect on intellectual development and character traits. They also play a ...
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...y also play a very important role in the socializing process of the child. Right ...
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...so play a very important role in the socializing process of the child. Right from the be...
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...m the bed time stories to the behavioral habits parents play a very important rol...
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...e bed time stories to the behavioral habits parents play a very important role in m...
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...etter than anyone else. They can provide critical input better than anyone else. ...
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... why it is believed by some that parents have the strongest role in a child'...
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... it is believed by some that parents have the strongest role in a child's de...
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... order to help children grow emotionally and socially. Children find out who they...
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...er to help children grow emotionally and socially. Children find out who they ar...
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...personality. Building good relationships boosts a child's self esteem and th...
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...comfort in those friendships when things get tough such as losing a pet or facing...
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...ort in those friendships when things get tough such as losing a pet or facing fa...
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...ily problems. Therefore, friendships are essential to assure children develop a h...
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...problems. Therefore, friendships are essential to assure children develop a healthy ps...
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...sure children develop a healthy psyche. When kids are surrounded by friends or ha...
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...lthy psyche. When kids are surrounded by friends or have one close friend, they h...
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...better self esteem, feel a sense of well being and experience fewer social proble...
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...lent media influences in kids lives. How much impact TV has on children depends o...
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...ds on many factors: how much they watch, their age and personality, whether they ...
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... alone or with adults, and whether their parents talk with them about what they s...
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...what has more significance. In the early years family generally has more impact b...
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...pact but in adolescence peers and TV may impact more. It appears that the power o...
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...of the peer group becomes more important when the family relationships are not cl...
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... supportive. For example, if the parents work extra jobs and are largely unavaila...
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...e, their children may turn to their peer group for emotional support. To put i...
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...g that behavior is affected by a complex interaction of many different factors su...
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...h as parents, peers and environment. All these are inextricably linked in the dev...
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...lopment of children. There is individual variation and therefore it is difficult ...
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...o generalize which factor plays the most significant role.
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...neralize which factor plays the most significant role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36613272311 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92627871214 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519450800915 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2914729206 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1923076923 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8076923077 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 34.0 4.38176352705 776% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 49.0 5.01903807615 976% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26213599685 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703304123796 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974753528878 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632105635951 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886811875698 0.056905535591 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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