Citizens of developing nations are buying a lot of private vehicles. The principle problem this causes is traffic congestion and the most viable solution is to plan on road facility before putting loads on the roads.
The primary dilemma developing countries face when their citizens start to buy cars is traffic jams. That is because each and everyday people are purchasing cars but road facility to accommodate those are not increasing every day. For example, according to Bangladesh Bureau of Statistics, everyday 29 new private modes of transport are added into the road of Dhaka city which leads to huge congestion and in peak hours the whole city becomes standstill. This leads to the wastage of working hours.
A long term solution is to plan on expanding the road facility before allowing citizens to purchase personal vehicles. This could solve the problem of traffic congestion if proper lane facility is present beforehand to run newly added vehicles. For example, the Mayor of Dhaka City Corporation recently committed to creating separate lanes for private transport in the city road facility. This, hopefully, will help city dwellers move easily during the congested hours.
In conclusion, with the development of country's economy, people tend to buy a lot of private cars to move from place to place but the unplanned increase will lead to heavy traffic in the office hours and a proper road facility is required to tackle the added congestion. It is often recommended that car owner should think about the road facility before deciding on the purchase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ing to Bangladesh Bureau of Statistics, everyday 29 new private modes of transport are a...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve easily during the congested hours. In conclusion, with the development of c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14007782101 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61376091636 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6705584832 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148597464528 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601777567996 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257965077949 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100451585484 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113316928457 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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