With the advancement of technology, today we are living in a world which is changing with tremendous speed. Many people might get better opportunities and think of this process as a boon, I personally think, most of the people are not as much satisfied with their lives now a days. Therefore, for three compelling reasons, I strongly agree with the statement above.
To begin with, current trends like being addicted to social media, gives people a false level of satisfaction in many ways. And in many cases, it might lead to depression at the end. If we bring ourselves ten years back, people did not keep themselves busy in social media, following every move of strangers and envy their achievement or happiness. But, with the gradual increase of involvement in social media, people now a days compare themselves with others, without knowing full story of that stranger. For instance, one of my friend, who is deeply engaged in recent trends, continually argue with the achievement of his friends that are posted in Facebook. Sometimes he complains about salary in current position, although it is enough for him to support his family and provide basic needs. But comparing himself with strangers he becomes depressed and always dissatisfied with his current position.
Secondly, people are now becoming more and more self centred. They have less time to gather and talk to one another. Everyone is busy competing with one another. World becomes very competitive and from childhood, kids are now hate others achievement or popularity. And people are now living in small houses, without any interaction with neighbours. In modern cities, it is very unlikely to know nearby people. People only go out for office work and get back to home. And after some time, they are getting tired of their lives and find that they are alone in this world.
Finally, another major change in today’s world is drastic change in environment. To construct larger and faster city, trees are cut down and modern technology takes over natural resources. To accommodate huge number of people, empty spaces are filled up, leaving no playground for kids, no green field to walk around and enjoy nature. Air, water and noise pollution contribute to make this world a pernicious place for living. Consequently, all of these changes effects mental happiness of people as well as causing harm to health. Therefore, people become dissatisfied with the environment, with the food they take and with they place they are living now.
To sum up, technology might make the world fast, but it causes dissatisfaction in the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... not as much satisfied with their lives now a days. Therefore, for three compelling reason...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... as much satisfied with their lives now a days. Therefore, for three compelling reason...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... of involvement in social media, people now a days compare themselves with others, without...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...involvement in social media, people now a days compare themselves with others, without...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hated'.
Suggestion: hated
...titive and from childhood, kids are now hate others achievement or popularity. And p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, in many cases, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0626450116 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67007097655 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584686774942 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2891939839 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.28 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.24 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299526711075 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077527639169 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601072444759 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160172236774 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818430014228 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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