The author claims that the greatest indicator of a nation is marked by the welfare of its people and not the achievements of its rulers, artists, scientists and other prominent persons. Although it looks deceptive at first glance to be supportive of this claim, the welfare of its people alone does not mark the greatness of a nation. if we look at the examples of some eminent figures over the course of history, it becomes clear on how they have left a mark on the world stage and made the nation very popular across the globe.
let us first take the example of the scientists at NASA who first made it possible to make humans travel to space and land on the moon. this was no simple task and required a lot of great minds and their hard work which has contributed in making this mission a success and made an unthinkable task realistic. At a time when the thought of a man landing on the moon was beyond the scope of thinking of many people, these great minds made it happen and Neil Armstrong became the first man to land on the moon. As a result of this mission, it inspired many other nations to look beyond the scope of the human planet and discover the vast galaxy beyond earth.
Additionally, let us look at a very prominent artist Giovanni who hails from Italy has made it presence all over world due to his exquisite paintings. His paintings have always been bought at great prices at auctions and has received widespread praise from many prominent critics. At a time when Italy was known for its food and was associated with its artistic skill, Giovanni made Italy's presence felt all over world due to his artistic skill. His achievements led to the rise of many other great painters from Italy and has made Italy the art capital of the world.
Alternatively, if we think about the welfare of nation, it also plays a major role in how the country is heading towards the future. Take India for example, where almost a majority of people live in poverty and make it difficult to make ends meet. but in spite of all the difficult conditions, India has many achievers in the field of science and art.
To sum it all, the greatness of a nation cannot be determined only by the welfare of the people but many other factors play an important role. The achievements of the nation is what leaves a mark on the world stage. In light of this, we can conclude that though the author's claim is not exactly true it does prove to be true to a certain extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, for example, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46784922395 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3745458206 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481152993348 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9052446579 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.529411765 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219052592304 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803615528827 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111244161412 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130575829798 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10728702609 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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