People work because they need money to live. What are some reasons that people work? Discuss one or more reasons. Use specific examples.
People work because they need money to live. What a classic fact isn’t it? That idea is a very old thinking on most of people’s point of view of working reason. Actually, as the world developed, there are many more reasons beyond that on why people are working. In the meantime, working has a much broader reasons including to become a lifestyle and a life satisfaction indicator.
To begin with, in this 4.0 world, people are becoming way workaholic than the world has ever be. Working is part of one’s lifestyle, especially for the young people. For instance, it has become an image to determine whether someone is successful or not based on their employment status. As long as they are working, it means that they are keeping themselves from crossing a fine line between successful regardless of how much money they make, and unsuccessful which described as being unemployed.
In addition, working also means as an indicator of satisfaction. This can be seen in a company with a very high career competition. For many people, to be able to work is one way to reached life satisfaction. For example, someone will work as hard as they can only to sit in a board position in a company with a certain reputable title such as Manger, Director, and CEO, without considering the salary. Through this simple explanation, clearly there are human beings who will push themselves to the limit to work for the sake of position and respect, as they think its satisfaction value is certainly bigger than the money.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Therefore, the cause for someone
is taking any job no longer limited on money as the reason but it gets broader as
the world evolving into a next-level technology era. As it explained above, the
lifestyle and the life satisfaction are a couple of reasons why people think
working is beyond the dollar worth of a job. <o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34674922601 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.99499121299 2.67179642975 187% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5554333473 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27736321402 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118433759799 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133670164334 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109263007193 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121720538468 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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