In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweight the drawbacks?
People have different views about whether using closed-circuit television is being increased to decrease crime or invading our privacy. While some people think video cameras in public spaces can be an invasion of privacy, I am of the opinion that the benefits outweight the drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people may reject using video cameras in public places. Firstly, these cameras might infringe upon our privacy, in the sense that all our actions are recorded and these recordings can be misused because individuals’ pictures are likely to be stolen for bad purposes. In other words, these pictures might be shared on the social networks without our agreements. Secondly, we may always have feeling of being followed and this can lead to feeling more nervous and scared than safe.
Despite the drawbacks mentioned above, I do believe that using surveillance cameras public has positive effects. The CCTV cameras could decrease crime rate and deter criminals before crimes are committed. Offenders could be less likely to operate in some places of cities where they know they are being watched. For example, offenders may always take advantages of people’s weakness in the public spaces to operating criminal acts such as stealing their wallets or other personal property. However, if these places equipped with video cameras, that can improve public safety and reduce pretty crimes. In addition, when crimes are committed, police officers can base on video evidence to catch and accuse offenders so that surveillance cameras could support police officers make cities more safe for citizens.
In conclusion, I can understand why some people might disapproval public video cameras, but it seems to me that CCTV is much more helpful in our life.
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- In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweight the drawbacks? 67
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28421052632 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61024333497 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4255470225 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.119970768241 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589091405183 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202668333783 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06010822867 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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