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Do you thin business should hire employees who will spend thier entire lives working for the company? Explain why you agree or disagree.
Job security and a sustainable financial lifestyle is what many employees seek. While it is undeniable that a lifetime employment would provide such benefits, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the potential minor advantages to this. In this essay I will set forth reasons and suitable examples as to why devoting to a one only job could be a negative in a long-term basis.
Firstly, were exmployment to be for a lifetime, profits would be depleted considerably. This could be due to the fact that employees, who would acknowledge that they own a secure job and could never be dismissed, would perfor...
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Sentence: Firstly, were exmployment to be for a lifetime, profits would be depleted considerably.
Error: exmployment Suggestion: employment
Sentence: Yet, if the Japanese working policy was to be implemented in the rest of the world, employees would be unable to renew old personnel for new refreshing minds, as it is already ocurring in Japan, Trade Unions have said.
Error: ocurring Suggestion: occurring
Sentence: To conclude, I believe a lifetime job would only aport detrimental effects on business markets, owing to the fact that productivity and profits would decrease significantly.
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