Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that learning something in a group is highly beneficial instead of learning anything in an isolated environment. This essay agrees that pupils should promote collective learning for their better future. Firstly this essay will discuss the fact that learning in team believes in shared responsibility for fulfilling objective and secondly discuss how greater success can be achieved through mobilization of multiple expertise.
The foremost benefit of pupils of any age and group working in team helps them to believe in collective effort. It allow them to carry out the biggest activities even if it consist of multiple threats and possibility of being collapsed because, it allows shared effort and participation regarding completion of various responsibility. As a result of that they are able to learn importance of diversity is one hand and on the other hand it will help them fulfill the intended goal and objective timely and accurately. For example, this is most evident in my country that, every school and colleges promotes the importance of team work and workshop for accomplishment of assignment.
On the other hand, learning any subjective concern individually may impairs the learner from the experience of expertise knowledge. Learners only get the idea or theoretical knowledge regarding how the problem can be solved rather than empathetic understanding of the importance of group mobilization and bonding between each member to make it happen in their harder time. For instance, The Himalayan Times recently reported that individual who participate in group work for learning or accomplishment of any purposive task would able to observe 35% more to the environment in comparison to those who follow learning individually.
In conclusion, achieving career objective is not that much difficult if one believes in the importance of team work and its mobilization instead of doing everything to make it happen by the effort of single person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
...hem to believe in collective effort. It allow them to carry out the biggest activitie...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
...y out the biggest activities even if it consist of multiple threats and possibility of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37942122186 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04830952184 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2001189349 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17201707858 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065425001237 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475387425605 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993320480507 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505135681497 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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