the two pie charts show the online shopping sales for retali sectors in canada in 2005 and 2010.
The given pie chart illustrate the information about online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 and 2010. We can observe that food and beverages occupied majority of space in pie chart in the year 2010 and Electronics and appliances has sallied well in the year 2005.
Firstly, electronics and appliances had a greater significant sales occupation in the year 2005 with 35% but, unfortunately 5% had dropped in the year 2010. Secondly, food and beverages business is not satisfactory in the year 2005 with 22% after five years in the year 2010 it got tremendous increase with 35%, nearly 20% had increased in five years of time.
Thirdly, home furnishing had got great response in 2005 with 25% of occupation. But, in the year 2010 home furnishing got unexpected drop. Finely, videogames are not popular at the time of 2005 so, video gaming industry got 18% business occupation. Moreover, in 2010 rapid growth had took place
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver, in 2010 rapid growth had took place
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94409937888 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68881693447 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2615840567 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235945083508 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126813679081 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158277912634 0.0843802449381 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189001468075 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155980729658 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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