Question:
Some people are making new friends by using socialising network websites and chatrooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people say that people should make new friends by face-to-face chat.Discuss both views and your opinion.
Answer:
Some people deem that media platform and online chat is a good way to make new friends in terms of socialing as well as no restricted national boundaries. Whereas, few believes that physical interaction can be a better way , with which I am in consummate accord due to sense of security and reliable relationship.
Admittedly, websites relationships are spiking now-a-days as users are provided with chat inboxes which opens there door towards other accountants to talk freely with some attachments like emojis and bitmojis which ushers in the easy way of depicting feelings. Eventually , helps in better socialising with new ones . Furthermore, when a person run a social website such as Facebook and Instagram where there are number of users from various nations, helps people to know about foreigners and their cultures,customs without constrained by any national bondages at boundaries . Finally , it can be said online sites are beneficial in widening the friend circle .
On the other hand , no doubt direct contact can be a excellent mean to flourish friendly bondings as during a personal interaction one can see someone's expressions even can judge the intention of the person from their body language. Moreover, having daily meets in physical presence make a deep close contact . Not only this, as one can hug each other and kiss as well which encourages the postivity from the person we commute . Hence , it can be better for personal ties if one have face -to - face chat.
To encapsulate, both the means of making new friends help people to conversate by their own ways but the better way is direct interaction as there are less chances of getting fake freinds rather than in chatrooms. Eventually, physical communication would be a great start for making new friends.
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| 2019-09-13 | Vicky Khalsa | 80 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8523723371 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9761598234 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231732326978 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855616577835 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735931113599 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150931859045 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503684602424 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.