Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•Explain the reasons for the noise•Apologise•Describe what action you take.

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

• Explain the reasons for the noise

• Apologise

• Describe what action you take.

Dear Sir,

This is Santhosh Mankala, from flat No 101, Vijetha Aryam residency your neighbour. This letter is written to seek apology from you for my actions which took place on Sunday night last week.

I have celebrated my 25th birthday that night where, there were many number of friends invited to the occasion. As the event kicked off since many of my guest were drunk they switched the music system on with a loud music. Many of us forgot that we are in a residential area surrounded with neighbours at peak of their sleeping time. I sincerely request you to accept my apology for the nuisance we created on the middle of that night.

Moreover, I already took action on my friends and educated them about the problems of loud music in our area. Besides this I assure you that of late, there won’t be any sort of disturbance from my side.

Hope you accept my situation and apologise me for the trouble I caused you on that day.

Regards,

M.Santhosh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...h birthday that night where, there were many number of friends invited to the occasion. As ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...the problems of loud music in our area. Besides this I assure you that of late, there w...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Santhosh
...used you on that day. Regards, M.Santhosh
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, so, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6976744186 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38541488308 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6945519517 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19035219591 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687291864543 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626072176464 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127937641393 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819897219088 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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