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Many people think that money brings happiness, but others think that having too much money is a problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is noticeable that there are two kinds of people who think money is the best way to be happy while the others' opinion having too much money can damage people's life. I strongly agree with first group of people. I want to investigate my opinion in the next paragraphs.
From my point of view ,nowadays everthing around us depends on money. If you want to live in a convenient life you have to earn a lot of money for yourself or your family. Of course it is true that money can be reason for happiness but there are some essential things that you are not able to gain them with money as conscie...
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