The artcile discuss about the symptons of asthma and states that asthma can be controlled with the right medicines and support it with three reasons. However, the professor doesn't think that asthma can be controlled and refutes each of the reason.
First, the article states that after each attack of asthma airways return to normal. However, the professor refute this point by mentioning about the new findings of cause of asthma. He explains that in between the episode of asthma attack airways set permanently.
Second, the article avers that asthmatic attack is cused by enveionemtnal factors as well as other factors such as exercise, emtional stress, or a variety of other factors. To cast doubt on this point, the professor states despite the fact that asthma can be caused due to many reasons, environmental reasons are more harmful than genetic factors.
Third, the article states that blocked airways due narrowing of bronchial tubes a asthmatic sympton. However, the professor doesn't believe that and explains the concept of remodeling for the cause of condtition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...h three reasons. However, the professor doesnt think that asthma can be controlled and...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: of course
...nt by mentioning about the new findings of cause of asthma. He explains that in between ...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of asthma. He explains that in between the episode of asthma attack airways set...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ctors. Third, the article states that blocked airways due narrowing of bronchi...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...irways due narrowing of bronchial tubes a asthmatic sympton. However, the profes...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hmatic sympton. However, the professor doesnt believe that and explains the concept ...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sympton. However, the professor doesnt believe that and explains the concept of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 1373.03311258 66% => OK
No of words: 173.0 270.72406181 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27167630058 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54885112411 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 145.348785872 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4516121574 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32365450944 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154824344511 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11708511032 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202936690311 0.162205337803 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154797419529 0.0443174109184 349% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.