Some people think that government should spend money on faster means of transport other think that government spend money on other thinks like city and environment.Discuss both view and give your own opinion?
Few person say that government can invest money on vehicles.While other believe that government must focus on other things such as urban areas and environment .I will discuss both views in my upcoming paragraph.
First and foremost,today transport is very common thing in human being life as well as everyone have using plethora electric devices.For instances,car,bike, truck, motorcycle,bus,taxi and so on.After that,anyone have a personal vehicle in their life because they have hectic schedule in their work place.Moreover,in these day competition level is very upsurge relate to any carrier lines. Furthermore,adolescent are many punctual in office that 's that they always time using the transportion such as public or private.
Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the, environment plays a essential role of life as far as government should focus on health issues that including by pollution.For examples,water,land,air,
noise pollution extra.However,there can causing plethora illness to the body.Otherwise,
government can pay for treatment but also urban regions.From my point of view,government already spent umpteen money on transport.Lastly,they could awareness about regard to environment and government should want to spend cash on city and environment.
All said and done,I reckon on the one hand,it is no doubt vehicle is basic need of human life.government have providing anybody.On the other hand,environment always giving positive energy that's why I think that government can spend money on local areas and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90748898678 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.06654461568 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665198237885 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.611263301 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 268.2 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.4 7.06120827912 530% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272145028774 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137131778961 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100865036956 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130217576783 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108607348244 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.0946893788 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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