The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarize the information by electing and reporting he main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictures describes the salmon's life span. Overall, the salmon would experience seven stages in two main forms - from eggs to adult fishes.
First of all, the spawning mature salmon lays eggs in fresh water such as rivers or streams before passing away within two weeks. The eggs will hatch after about 3 months and release infant salmons called alevins into the water. The alevins will feed off yolk-sac for various week because they are not able to find food by themselves. Few months after, the alevins grow up an become parrs which reach the size of an adult's finger.
The fifth step is when the parrs are one to three years old, they will group up and migrate to the ocean where they are named after “smolts”. they will spend up to 8 years in the ocean until they reach the certain stage of growth and maturity before carrying out another immigration back to the river (or streams) that they were born to spawn. after this final stage, the life cycle of the salmon will begin again.
- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emission in different countries during the three different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant. 87
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarize the information by electing and reporting he main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- The pie chart below show the share of Oscar winners by film genre for 2003 and 2008 72
- the pie charts below give information about household expenditure of an average US family in different years 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
The given pictures describes the salmons life span. Overall, the salmon would ex...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
.... Few months after, the alevins grow up an become parrs which reach the size of an...
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Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...hey are named after 'smolts'. they will spend up to 8 years in the ocean u...
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Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...r streams that they were born to spawn. after this final stage, the life cycle of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66480446927 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16289557861 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6762951838 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826477186079 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045365917912 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468906046939 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678415867738 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391284637147 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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