In some countries more and more shops are open longer hours every day.
What are positive and negative developments of this?
The trend of doing business till late night is burgeoning in many nations; however, it has both positive and negative effects on individuals and society. While it begets benefits in terms of convenience for the working people, some security risks are associated with this development.
To embark with, the good side of extended opening hours is the privilege it gives to the people with a tight schedule to shop at their convenient time. This is to say, many people have tiring routine due to the engagement in odd jobs along with the full-time job, so they have to take a day off to do groceries and purchase other house-hold stuff. Therefore, this development brings ease for the people, who are unable to spare time from their daily routine, to do shopping during day time. For instance, employers in Canada claimed that the number of absentees from workplace to do shopping was more during the start of the month but now it is reduced to a great extent.
Nevertheless, this development has brought some safety troubles for the business owners because at mid-night shops are liable to theft and robbery. Local offenders found it easy to rob from shops, as the allowed working hours by the government for shops is till 8 o clock after that owners do it at their own risk. While the government provides security for day time, at night security is a great issue associated with this development. For example, local police of California stated in the Daily Times that 46% of criminal cases are reported after 12 AM due to security lapse.
To conclude, this essay argued that the opening of shops for prolonged hours embolden consumers to shop at their own pace; however, on the negative side, the threat of increase in crime rate is the major drawback associated with it. If government provides security at night, it would be a good development for the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85046728972 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57967627246 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.3603473776 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.75 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204460884905 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764102097178 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412975825175 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126536222879 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263392171639 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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