Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people feel that overusing computers in education is a positive tendency. others argue that as there is possibility of negative consequences we should decrease the use of computers in schooling. In my view, we should use technology more in education.
On the one hand,it is understandable why some people think that using computers more leads to negative results. As known,we can encounter not only useful but also unnecessary contents on the internet. Useless things may end up with undesirable behaviours. also there are harms of utilizing computers recognised as the reasons of some health problems among teenagers. To illustrate,pupils sit in front of computers at school, besides, they make use of computers and phones whenever they want to do their homework, too. As a result, they receive lots of radiation and it can cause negative consequences such as stress. By contrast,if students take only the advantages of technology, it will be more healthy for them.
On the other hand,I would agree with those who believe that using technology is a positive tendency. Firstly, technology gives us great opportunities to achieve any information we want. For example, Wikipedia and other sites like this are main sources for obtaining any data. Secondly, computers facilitate circumstances of getting education. For instance, we can join online courses and improve our skills by utilizing technology beneficially. Finally, different means of technology let us do our hometask efficient way and very quickly.
İn conclusion,while there are some reasons to believe that overusing computers may result in negative consequences among students, my own view is that it is hard to get progress in education without technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14787798405 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8032880128 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27795535482 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854456575365 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750222902667 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169634391178 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899560868481 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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