You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Describe the type of accommodation you would like
Explain what facilities you will need nearby
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask for information about the accommodation, which is rented in Go Vap District. In November I will have a business travel in three months from 1st of November to 31st of January.
I need a small and clean flat with one bedroom. I just would like a kitchen with all equipment for cooking. In addition, my work requires to use computer so my flat should have internet.
However, I do not drive a car so I would like you can choose for me a flat which is nearby bus station and if it is beside a park so great because I can play outdoor sports in the morning.
If you have anything you feel it is suitable for me,please contact me with my phone number 0983130210.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'business travel'.
Suggestion: business travel
...o Vap District. In November I will have a business travel in three months from 1st of November to...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
... cooking. In addition, my work requires to use computer so my flat should have interne...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , please
... anything you feel it is suitable for me,please contact me with my phone number 0983130...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51724137931 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56433046336 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662068965517 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3868660263 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.875 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234406500102 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830080037035 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065763086609 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116026513614 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411775769197 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.