Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Young people often want to live new experiences, and often those actions mean a risk for their lives. However, it is easy to create order if they follow certain rules, such as do not let their access to certain places until they are over 18 years old. Most of the times teenagers are less responsible than adults. Rules can be used as a tool to create an awareness of responsibility for young people. I believe that because young people should be aware of their actions, it is necessary they obey society rules, which really are not too strict for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 52.1666666667 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 454.0 1977.66487455 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 407.700716846 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.48103885553 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34273344621 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 212.727598566 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.74 0.524837075471 141% => OK
syllable_count: 144.0 618.680645161 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0255464913 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143259511543 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657611840119 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049491076943 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143259511543 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 86.8835125448 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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