IT'S EVIDENT FROM THE STATED MAPS THAT, THERE HAD BEEN A DRASTIC CHANGE IN THE WAY ROADS WERE BEING USED IN 2007 AND IN 2010.
THE MOST IMPORTANT FEATHER OR DIFFERENCE WHICH IS PREVALENT IS THE USER FRIENDLINESS OF THE ROAD. IN THE YEAR 2007, THERE HAD BEEN ONLY A SINGLE SPOT OR SPACE FOR CAR PARKING FOR BOTH STAFF AND GENERAL PEOPLE. FOR THAT REASON, IT WAS DIFFICULT TO ACCESS THE PARKING SPACE. ON THE OTHER SIDE, IN 2010, IT WAS SEEN THAT SEPARATE SPACE HAD BEEN ALLOCATED FOR STUFF AS WELL AS PUBLIC WHICH WAS EASILY ACCESSIBLE. MOREOVER, ROUND OVER HAD PLAYED A ROLE TO MAKE THE ROAD MORE CONVENIENT.
ONE OTHER THING IS THE DISTANCE OD BUS STOP.
IN CASE OF CITY HOSPITAL IN 2007, WE CAN SEE THAT THE BUS STOP WAS FAR AWAY FROM THE HOSPITAL. IT WAS KIND OF AN OBSTACLE FOR PEOPLE WHO WISH TO REACH HOSPITAL. IN CONTRAST TO THAT, IN THE YEAR 2010, WE HAVE SEEN THAT THE BUS STOP WAS JUST ADJACENT TO HOSPITAL ROAD WHICH MADE IT EASIER TO ACCESS THE HOSPITAL.
TO CONCLUDE , IT CAN BE IMPLIED THAT, SYSTEMATIC CHANGE IN THE ROAD STRUCTURE HAS MADE IT CONVENIENT TO REACH HOSPITAL.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...PS THAT, THERE HAD BEEN A DRASTIC CHANGE IN THE WAY ROADS WERE BEING USED IN 2007...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...SIDE, IN 2010, IT WAS SEEN THAT SEPARATE SPACE HAD BEEN ALLOCATED FOR STUFF AS WE...
^^
Line 6, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...AL IN 2007, WE CAN SEE THAT THE BUS STOP WAS FAR AWAY FROM THE HOSPITAL. IT WAS K...
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Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'AN' after a classification term. Use simply 'KIND OF'.
Suggestion: KIND OF
... WAS FAR AWAY FROM THE HOSPITAL. IT WAS KIND OF AN OBSTACLE FOR PEOPLE WHO WISH TO REACH H...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...R TO ACCESS THE HOSPITAL. TO CONCLUDE , IT CAN BE IMPLIED THAT, SYSTEMATIC CHA...
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Line 8, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...UDE , IT CAN BE IMPLIED THAT, SYSTEMATIC CHANGE IN THE ROAD STRUCTURE HAS MADE IT...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, in contrast, kind of, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39901477833 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24432193966 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2118503937 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135606948096 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532487362849 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418698095228 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684917157753 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467311117678 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.