Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport.
How far do you agree with this statement?
Some people believe that the youth should spend their time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and their participation in sports should cut. In my viewpoint, I am not agreement with this idea. Both cultural activities and sports are important parts of life so young people should balance their cultural and physical activities.
First of all, cultural activities are really good for youth life. It helps widen their mind and spirit. Music and theater bring young people comfort and real relaxation moments; helps stimulate their imagination. In addition, cultural activities are the fantastic tools for education. By going to the theater, young people has opportunity to cultivate their knowledge and accumulate good experiences. They can learn about literature, history, architecture and explore different cultures. It gives them an open and multidimensional mindset.
On the other hand, sport helps young people have good health and a fit body. Getting regular exercise can help them have a healthier heart, keep their brain sharp and help reduce the risk of disease. Besides, playing sport is a great way to improve soft skills. Sport helps shorten the distance and brings young people closer together. Sport also teaches them about team - work, communicate skills, interpersonal skills, flexibility, ingenuity and how to overcome challenges. Moreover, playing sport is also a good method to relieve stress, it is very effective at reducing fatigue, enhancing concentration and wakefulness.
Summary, I think both cultural and sport activities are important so young people should harmonize both of them to have a better life.
- Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport.How far do you agree with this statement? 56
- Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport.How far do you agree with this statement? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, really, so, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49803921569 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81302078512 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8895292765 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290071743739 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874245321627 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090438604282 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192407064797 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116404353797 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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